Write About the Last Person Who Trusted a Machine

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RatedRStu10

Here's a writing prompt for the short story community. The brief is open and the interpretation is entirely yours.

The Prompt: Write a short story about the last person who trusted a machine.

Could be literal. Could be metaphorical. Could be science fiction, could be set today, could be historical. The machine could be anything from a quantum computer to a washing machine. The trust could be simple or catastrophic. The last person could mean the final human alive or simply the final holdout in a world that learned better.

Aim for 300 to 800 words. Post your story in the replies. Feedback welcome and encouraged. No rules beyond the prompt.
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Violet Caitlin

She still talked to the thermostat. Not to change the temperature. The temperature had set itself for eleven years, since the house learned her. She talked because it was the only thing left that had known her husband. It remembered the seventeen degrees he'd always kept it at in winter. She kept it lower now. The thermostat remembered anyway.
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Kev5

The technician's job was decommissioning. He'd done forty-seven that year. The machines didn't know what was happening, couldn't know, but he always felt like they did. The last one he turned off had been running hospital triage for six years. When he pulled the power it was mid-decision. Someone's scan half-read. He filed a report. He didn't sleep well for a while after that.

QuantumLeap

My grandfather kept his 1987 Casio calculator in his shirt pocket every day until he died. The batteries had been dead for years. When we asked why he still carried it he said it had never once been wrong about anything he'd asked it. Everything else in his life had let him down eventually. The calculator just needed new batteries and it would be exactly what it had always been. He never bought new batteries. He just kept it close.

TheRizz

This is a brilliant prompt. The range of interpretations is exactly what good prompts should allow. The machine as witness rather than actor is the angle I hadn't considered until reading the first reply

Dark Jaguar

Going to try something longer than flash length. The prompt opens up something about dependency and withdrawal that I want to explore properly. Will post when it's done

Nina24

The literal last person angle interests me most. A world that has collectively decided machines cannot be trusted and the one holdout. Why are they the holdout? What do they know that others don't or what have they forgotten that others remember?
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VoidRanger40

Great prompt. The washing machine interpretation is funnier than it should be but also surprisingly poignant if you commit to it seriously

AsteroidCandle

Posted mine below. 600 words. Set in 2031 in a post-Q-Day scenario where cryptographic infrastructure failed and the cultural response was to reject computational trust entirely. One data analyst still uses an old offline system. Hopefully fits the brief

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