Wrote this about rain

[Craig]

Feedback welcome.

The rain on the window
does not care about its pattern.
It arrives sideways if the wind suggests it.
It does not try to flatter

or perform for you.
It simply happens, and the street goes darker,
and the people under awnings check their phones,
and somewhere a dog is barking.

Not sure about the ending

[WildManSteve40]

Thanks for posting. Let it develop and have another stab at it later

[Ava_75]

Hmm, not convinced. Legend