Wrote this about childhood

[Undertaker00]

Feedback welcome.

Summer was longer then.
Not because it was, but because
the days had fewer places to be.
We filled them without a cause.

The hours we spent doing nothing
took all day to do properly.
We were expert at being nowhere.
I have mostly lost that property.

Still tweaking it but this is the current version

[Courier53]

I love the way you put that. I find that the things that stay with you are rarely the ones that shout the loudest.

I find these conversations more useful than reading reviews