Something about supermarkets

[Fan22]

Not entirely happy with it but posting it anyway.

Sunday morning in the supermarket
is a specific kind of peace.
The shelves are half-stocked still.
The staff are arranging the cheese.

A man is choosing between two yoghurts
with the focus of someone deciding something real.
I pick up milk I do not need yet.
We are all here buying time. It is the deal.

Still tweaking it but this is the current version.

[Tara_66]

Not sure that is the whole picture. I find the financial angle of any big story is usually the most underreported part.

Interesting to see where it goes.

[Highland Fatima]

Not entirely happy with it but posting it anyway. Sunday morning in the supermarket is a specific kind of peace. The shelves are half-stocke

Agree completely, preparation is everything. Turned out alright when I did it.