Wrote this at the end of winter

Started by Phil80, Apr 04, 2026, 01:01 AM

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Phil80

This came out in one go, which is unusual for me.

February does not end. It extends.
It stretches its grey self
into what should be March
and sits there like something left on a shelf

that nobody wants to deal with.
Then one morning the light is different.
Just slightly. Just enough.
February notices and becomes less insistent.

Curious if this lands

ElPresidente

Not worth cutting corners on that part. Happy to answer questions if you get stuck

NightOwl

Cannot really disagree with that. Definitely worth picking up. ;D

Quanta

That checks out from what I have seen. The thing that actually helped me was checking what changed just before the problem started.

Give it a go and report back

QuantumLeap34

The best heel work is when they make a point you almost agree with before going too far. Believable motivation makes the character

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