Flash fiction challenge: 300 words, first line provided. Deadline July 31

[Lucky Dean]

Time for another flash round. The challenge is a complete story in 300 words or fewer, and everyone starts from the same first line: The key still worked, which surprised her

Everything after that line is yours. Any genre, any tone, the only requirements are the opening line exactly as written, the word cap, and that it reads as a whole story rather than an excerpt. Titles do not count toward the limit

The shared first line makes this format sing because we get to watch twenty writers walk through the same door into completely different rooms. Last time we did this the entries ranged from a heist to a ghost story to something that made half the board cry about a garden shed

One entry per person, post directly in the thread, and voting opens August 1 by poll. Feedback is welcome after the deadline so early entries do not get more workshopping than late ones. 300 words, go

[Kyle99]

The key still worked, which surprised her, because she had thrown it in the river. Okay I am in

[StoneCold]

That is already better than my whole draft and it is one sentence, delete it before I steal it

[GatewayDrifter]

Question, does the first line count within the 300 words or on top? Every word matters at this length

[Slay40]

Counts within, so really you have 292 of your own. Suffer like the rest of us

[NicholasCleverley]

The shed story from last round still haunts me. Whoever wrote it, you owe me emotionally

[Northernah]

Genre prediction thread, I am guessing we get at least four returning to a childhood home and at least two where the key is metaphorical

[Craig90]

The key being literal is the twist at this point

[Dylan]

First timer here, is it bad form to write something funny when everyone else goes literary? The line is begging for a farce

[Dark Elizabeth]

Funny wins these more often than you would think. A perfect joke structure IS a story structure

[RedWrench]

Drafting mine tonight. The hard part of 300 words is not the writing, it is the deleting

[Molly4]

292 words about deleting words incoming from someone in this thread, calling it now